Edits.
Things I have just learned while editing my dissertation:
-The American Psychological Association requests that "Although" and "Whereas" be used in place of "While."
- Numbers being compared to other numbers equal to or over 10 are expressed numerically.
-When a citation has six or more authors, reduce to the first author and use et al. even on the first citation of the work.
Those are the main insights I have gleaned thus far, although (or whereas?) I am only on page 9. Thumbing ahead, I see several comments made by my advisor, such as "Awkward" and "Can you rephrase?"
Le sigh.
Three weeks, four days to internship…
-l
